I WILL BE WATER
A poem about negativity bias and rumination!!
Whether the flight is full of madness,
or is it free of any bad things,
I travel through the bypass in my mind,
Go to a far off place off this land,
take two million hits and die,
whether the flight is gonna crash,
or is it gonna land well triumphant,
I take my mind to a nice ride,
the zephyr hits my blue eyes,
dust just blinds my whole life,
I fall off a cliff and die.
Well what all happens and doesn’t happen,
whether it is good or inevitable sadness,
whether it’s a success or failure,
I am destined to feel like a loser,
shipping loads of dolor,
That I manufactured with my own head,
All alone sitting in a corner,
crying and thinking about grief and forlorness,
I ignore the gifts and pretty decorations,
That came to me and was handed,
I always look at wrong side,
I know that I am not sure,
I don’t know what my future holds,
I don’t know what I’d do,
I don’t know whether there is a way,
I am unsure whether I am fine,
Or am I doing everything right,
I know that I can’t be fit as ice,
But surely will be water,
that can fit in any container.
FORGIVE ME FOR GRAMMATICAL INCORRECT SENTENCES OR ANY TYPOS, I DON’T KNOW IF THIS IS GOOD, I JUST WROTE IT WANTING TO write a not so poetic but poem poetry.
IT’S A POEM I WROTE VERY LONG BACK!!!


My favorite line is when you did the repetition technique for the "I don't know part 3x." it's poetic despite it being literal. :) and the "die" part caught me off guard. XD
Tip:
Have an objective/s first in your mind. This is will give your ideas a sense of direction. Not only for you but for your readers. So that it won't be scattered much.
Ask yourself:
What would be the main focus?
Ex: for my yellow poem
- I want it to be in poetic language, - I want it to talk about missing yellow
- I want it to rhyme
Remember: In poetry, there's no such thing as wrong or right grammar since it's different from my prose. Look at the line is my yellow poem:
It's forevermore locked
Away, it felt grey
It's doesn't fit traditional grammar but what made it better is because away is able to connect with the 1st line and continued to the next line or away can be both of them. Hope this kinda is not confusing. 😅 XD
Oh, is it true you have blue eyes or is it a metaphor? An irrelevant question haha.